First Poetry Attempt :)

I was never a poet... when i tried also, i ended up writing story lines but not poetic verses..... i was going thru a few poems today...they sounded like really awesome... so i just thot of this so-called poetic lines of mine.... its a testimonial i wrote for him... atleast like 2.5yrs ago...

PARADOX!!!

Walkin along the lines of Daffodils..
Feelin da Fragnance of Silence...
Twinklin my eyes at da Glittering Water...
I Fancy a guy.......

he is Nothing....but he is Everything
he is all Void...but so Complete
he is a Sluggard...but Vivacious
he is Artful..and again Artless
he is Ambiguous...but still Conspicuous
he is all Mistakes...so very Perfect
he is Invincible...yet Vulnerable
he is so Vivid...on da contrary Enigmatic
Pragmmatic....but admires Objectivism
he is so Detestable...but the most Lovable :)

This one is like one of the best attempts i made for creating poety outta my mind! And while going through this one today after many many days, i felt like really happy... so few words but it clearly explains how much I admire him... Such is the Poetry!!

A bow to all the lovely Poets around......Poetry is indeed Magic with Words!!! :)

24 comments:

Chocolate Lover said...

awww.. nice one :)

vinita said...

it damn cute :)

prajyot said...

cute.. awesome...great

Abhishek Khanna said...

Nostalgic :)

This pic is in pune 2007 i guess!

Awesome poem i must say :)

rajat said...

lovely piece of work

Vyas T said...

Wah Wa! Wah Wa!!

Divya said...

Thanks all :) :)

Sushri said...

Awww!! Really cute..the pic's nice too! You could consider curls again :P

Suresh Kumar said...

Kuch bhi nahi hain... par tere liye woh sab kuch hain... :)

very romantic da... I don't know the rules of poem... bt this has come nice...

HP said...

Great work Divya! Keep it up!! - Hari

Thousif Raza said...

oji good attempt... i would say very very good attempt... poetry is all about pouring your heart out. and you have just done that... cool


take care and keep writing....

Tulika said...

Beautiful verse,
Paradoxical delight.
:)

Besties mate.!!

Sach! said...

awesome :)
someone just got lucky ;))

Arvi said...

Nice one :)

Farila said...

I think you would love the lyrics of Chester Bennington.. try In Pieces etc.

It was a lovely effort Divya and cannot believe this is your first attempt.

khushi said...

nice one Divya! :)

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

only a true girl could write like this. :) banda bada lucky hai :D

Sorcerer said...

lovely!!

HaRy!! said...

yur poem....oh ya first attempt itself very enigmatic! hmm he! , cya around

akanksha said...

Hopped here from Abhishek's blog:-)
And loved the poetry! It is sooooooooooooooooooooo cuute:)
And nice pic!

Mohan said...

Good one! First time here.. look forward to be more often :)

Pria said...

just landed here.. such a sweet poem n cute pik too.. :) keep writing!!

yourstylentrend said...

the furobiker seems to be lucky one :)

tim said...

wow, cool, we don't need to be poetic, to express our feelings. only words needed and the creativity to outshine..

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